Thursday 22 January 2015

25 Word Pitch - Animoto


12 comments:

  1. I believe the target market is 21 - 39 year olds
    I anticipate seeing the following artists: Muse, Foo Fighters
    To improve, have you considered a colour scheme/theme

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  2. I believe that the target market is 21 - 39.
    I anticipate seeing the following artists The Kooks, Cage The Elephant and The Killers.
    To improve, have you considered specifying what gender your target audience is.

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  3. I believe that the target market is 16 - 25 year olds.
    I anticipate seeing Arctic monkeys, oasis, the cure.
    To improve, have you considered lowering the price.

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  4. I believe that the target market is 21-39 year old males who are labelled as Indie.
    I anticipate seeing the following artists; Oasis and The Twang
    To improve have you considered using a different video type- I don't see the relevance to the leaves. Also talk about colour scheme that your magazine will use.

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  5. I believe that the target audience is 21-39 year old Indie Scenester and Young Alts.

    I anticipate seeing the following artists: Oasis, The Twang and General Fiasco.

    To improve, have you considered mentioning what gender you are aiming the magazine at (or if you are aiming it at both males and females)- although I can see that you are probably aiming it at males, you could make this clearer.

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  6. I believe the target market is 21-39 year olds interested in indie and alternative rock (indie scensters, young alts)
    I anticipate seeing the following artists: Oasis, The twang.
    To improve have you considered new artists to appeal to the indie scensters who like to stay ahead of trends and maybe a specific colour scheme for your magazine.
    I like the name Fix I think it stands out well.

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  7. I believe that the target market is 21-39 year olds, mainly males, Indie scenesters amd Young Alts.
    I anticipate seeing artists such as Oasis, The Twang and General Fiasco.
    To improve, have you considered setting a colour scheme and stating more specific information about your audience eg gender.

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  8. I believe the target market is 21 - 39 year old indie scenesters and young alts.
    I anticipate seeing the following artists Oasis and The Twang.
    To improve you could have made the fashion style and gender audience clearer.

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  9. I believe the target market is 21 - 39 year old indie scenesters and young alts.
    I anticipate seeing the following artists Oasis and The Twang.
    To improve you could have made the fashion style and gender audience clearer.

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  10. I believe the target market is alternative/indie young adults and adults.
    I anticipate artists such as Oasis, The Kooks, Muse.
    To improve, consider a colour scheme, or aiming it at mainly one gender, as it would allow you to focus the content more.

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  11. I believe that the target audience is that of the age of 21 - 39 year old indie scenesters, and young alts. Although you do not specify the gender, I feel that the general tone of your magazine is for a predominantly male audience.
    I anticipate seeing these artists, or artists in the same genre as: The Twang, Catfish And The Bottlemen, The Jam, The Kooks etc. I expect some older bands such as The Cure as it will relate more to your older audience.
    To improve, I would contemplate raising the price as those who have the same price, have a lower aged target audience meaning that your target audience can afford more, however this also means there needs to be a lot of detail.
    Also, you do not specify either the fashion or colour scheme of your magazine. This I can find out on your blog, however, it perhaps would have been wise to have the pitch show a little of these thing.

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  12. I believe that the target audience is 21-39 years old and indie scenestars and young alts.
    I anticipate seeing the following artists; The Twang, Catfish and the Bottlemen
    To improve, have you considered rising the price as people who are mid 30's wouldn't be put off by a price higher than £4.99

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