From looking at your draft, I like the name that you have chosen for the magazine, the contents page looks really good but the font could be better and the text can be a lot smaller. The text in the double page can be a lot smaller as well. But other than that a very good draft
I really like the layout of your double page spread and how you have used a range of pictures on the right hand page. I feel that the article could have maybe been laid out better as there are bigger gaps between some of the questions and answers than others, also you could have maybe done more writing. But other than that it is really good and the title is very effective.